Feedback from my drafts:
Elijah
- also mentioned that my first ident looked good and it was clear on what channel I was doing it for. However, some bits looked fast. While my second ident, I have a clear narrative, but according to Elijah there, \are some shots that looked a bit longer, such as getting the Pizza, which I personally think I could have shortened down to just getting the boxes and drinks.
Richard
- The second feedback I got from Richard emphasized that my idents were good as I convey their purpose alongside the point, I had some basic scenes.
Maria
- According to Maria The clips showcase a good case of continuity and flow nicely together.
- The transitions were smooth and appealing to look at .
-She suggested to fix the cut out at the ned where it has the white screen and ITV2 logo
- Also mentioned the usage of graphics are clearly presented as I presented what channel it is and the audience can easily recognize the channel which is ITV2
while for my second feedback:
Maria also mentioned the USP about my second ident is that I have sponsor dominos which is something different compared to what she saw with others' work. When it comes to editing Maria mention the fact that my voice overs and the usage of music set the vibes and made my ident look calm and chilled.
I got a feedback suggesting that my ident were to basic for ITV2 along with how someone wouldn't go for a ''run early in the morning' 'I personally disagree with this specific comment as I feel like most people can fully relate to my idents or they would relate to a part of my ident.For instance, the eating part or even the watching TV on my first ident.
The second feedback I got which i strongly disagree is that my idents are '' basic'' for ITV2. The reason why i disagree is because i think that ITV2 is a TV channel that present people daily life ,like Love island which is reality show. In addiction ITV2 is based on reality and people daily life which my ident covers it.
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